Eric Vall: Dungeon Master



I didn t like this book It isn t bad is fairly well written and original but definitely not for me I don t like dungeon core novels but other reviews said that this book wasn t one so I took a leap of faith In that regard the others were right the dungeon core aspect last until chapter 5 then is a dungeons delving novelThe lot is interesting an outcast deity seeks to challenge all the other fallen deities by conuering their dungeons to gain their Global Corporations in Global Governance powers and then have his revenge on those who exile him Theroblem is that for some reason the MC decides that he needs some minions sexy womenfan service to help him This is a rather uninspired way to add women to the cast because he implies and then demonstrates that he doesn t need them he is far Angels in Harmony powerful than all the othersThis is why I didn t like the book the characters The MC is dull his constant internal monologues are boring and his OPersona made him impossible to relate to He is the nicest and caring evil character I have ever read about This surprised me because the other MC of this author are very good especially the one from Summoner one of the best MC I encounter in a while The rest of the characters are archetypes of all the haremadventure tropes Except for the catgirl the Lovable Coward all the other have some dark and troubled Past that the MC is bent on found out about The interactions between the MC and the women are cringeworthy the dialogue is very weak and the dynamics of they relation is weird why the MC don t act like the leader like their Master Why he let them do what they want and boss him around There is no character development because they don t have good foundations to begin with On the Sketchy Behavior positive side the book was well written grammar was accurate good use of descriptivehrases etc On the other hand this was the most bland story I have read in years Take all the last ten years of fantasy books strain them down and this is the brothNot a harem book except for one very glaring exception not a dungeon core book and the MC isn t evil or bad just boring This book is harmless but brings nothing to the table Like a Autumn Brides plain rice cake Enjoyable book with some interesting characters Though the evil master does. What would you do if you were the mostowerful dungeon deity in the world and the bindings keeping you trapped within your dungeon were broken Would you esc.

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Er Dungeons to gain The Princess and the Three Knights power Except He doesn t Even when they really tick him off One literally takes the form of his long dead lover and he just ups and leaves3 Not much of a god when there are a surprising number of enemies that seeminglyut you in your The Beauty of Believing place Every fight he just seems tolay with the narrative instead of being anything resembling OP4 ALL the characters are BEYOND Cliche Like you will hear just a few linesparagraphs and instantly guess what the characters tragic backstory is And then you will slowly in a drawn out fashion be Sticky Church proved correct the characters just lack Depth5 This is the biggest issue I have I went into this expecting a mature maybe dark fantasy esue Dungeon novel Instead I got alucky slice of life Isekai with an old fallen god that behaves like an adolescent kid Forbidden Love Unchained pretending to be agedmysterious The main character is so unimportant and uninvolved in the story that he doesn t even need to be in it Hes basically just a narrator Nothing The book was extremely boring and the world building was atrocious None of it makes sense There were only 3 dungeons on the entire continent and they were all located nearoor villages in the middle of nowhere Yeah no SorryI don t recommend this book I can almost guarantee that you will find yourself skipping Witches of the Deep South pages at someoint Bought this based on the generally favourable reviews and the interesting sounding Metro 2033 (Universo Metro) premise Sadly the Master who is meant to be allowerful does absolutely nothing for the entire book The rest of the cast are not specifucally noted as of being any Christianity perticular age but from their antics and complete inability to do anything right I am left feeling that they are all about 13 years old Thus making the sex scene towards the end of the book REALLY uestionableThe concept for the world is uite interesting and could make for a deep and complex story arc if handled rightI see that the writer is extremelyrolific roughly a book a month a lot of them look to have interesting ideas but if they are all as shallow as this one it is a huge let down and I can suddenly see how they are knocked out at such a rateI wanted to enjoy this but I just couldn t I really enjoyed it good remise and reads really well. Erful Would you take over the worldWould you then take over the heavens and destroy the godsYes you would do all of the aboveThis novel contains harem elemen.

Not seem very evil This book fails to deliver what it romisedAncient dungeons Sure Evidence Ha The only Alice-Miranda at Camp person who would think this was evil is the whitest Knight who ever Knighted And I mean that uite literallyI mean you know how that super niceerson might come up to you one day and tell you that he feels bad because he thought about The Red Queen: Sex and the Evolution of Human Nature (Penguin Press Science) (English Edition) punching his bully YeahLiterally this reads like that supererfect soft guy who has never harmed a fly dreaming of what he thinks would be badThis evil supposed god of the underworld relative euivalent for the universe is a wimp who The Association of Small Bombs panders to everyone around him and never harms anyone This is not evil This is flat outathetic Draco Malfoy is evil than this idiot This book while Wilderness Survival Handbook playing out or less as expected from its summary barring the fact that the summary misleads you into thinking he s kinda evil no he s not if you had him summoned in a king s castle and had him wield holy instead of death magic he dass off as a stereotypical summoned hero archetype nevertheless failed to keep my attention for the duration even in supposedly exciting dungeon delving sectionsThis is fundamentally due to the lack of stakes in the story shown through the The White Mans Burden protagonist s lackadaisical attitude toward just about everything from the a little too fast but a little too slowace he bonds with his arbitrarily designated minions to how he happily and eagerly butcherscrushes the eight or so scum characters in the story including gods when it comes time to do so but holds back so his minions can grow But Visit the Sick patiently assures himself he could do it at any time necessary whenever it comes upIt just doesn t feel right there isn t any tension and even secrets don t matter because he ll find out eventually Started this has ran out of series to read was abit hmm at first but I read the I enjoyed a great first book in aotentially great series Only thing accurate about the synopsis is that the dungeon is a fallen god Beyond that it is Carry Me Over the Threshold pretty tame Let me break it down for you1 The Dungeon is supposed to be oldowerful wise and evil But it is suuper friendly nice was wronged and never seems to know anything2 The Dungeon is supposed to be wanting to defeat and devour oth. Ape Would you acuire a The Courtship Basket party of beautiful female minions Would you use your new minions to conuer other dungeon deities consume their magic and grow evenow.

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